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« on: February 20, 2011, 06:20:06 PM »

Well, here I am sitting at my laptop a week before my assignment is due and I CANNOT seem to pull anything together. I've tried the mapping exercises detailed in the binder, I've read the suggested stories to help spark my creativity, and I've spent countless hours with pencil in hand hovering over paper. Still nothing. The funny thing is that I give this type of assignment to my own students quite regularly: take a list of words and create a story using them. The irony is that I cannot seem to do it myself. Any suggestions as to how I can unblock this writer's block?
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« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2011, 08:30:45 PM »

I had a hard time with that one too. Then I realized you don't have to use the words they gave you, they're supposed to trigger an idea. If I remember correctly, one of the words was candle. Candle reminded me of birthdays, my story is about a little boy's birthday.

Try not getting hung up on using their ideas. All they want to do is give you some ways to come up with story ideas. You can pretty much just write whatever you want to.
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« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2011, 09:18:38 PM »

The word list is only there to help...if it doesn't help, you can feel free to toss it out.

The way I come up with short story ideas is to think of a character with something he needs very badly ...something that he can't get easily but that he (at least feels like) he can't live without.

Little boy wants desperately to give his mom the best present ever but he doesn't have any money -- so he has to use his creativity to come up with a solution.

Girl wants the lead in the school play but she not only has to act and sing, she has to dance. With two left feet, how can she meet her goal?

So give the character something to want/need desperately.
Give the character lots of obstacles.
But give the character something...some core characteristic that will help him/her make it through the challenge.

Then you'll end up with a strong plot and a compelling story.
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« Reply #3 on: February 21, 2011, 12:26:01 PM »

I found that I struggled with many of my assignments (and still do) because I was trying to come up with the most original story ... this is just not realistic (at least not for me).  I write what I think my instructor wants me to write and I end up not enjoying my stories at all.  Then I started to find my writing voice, my style ... still working on it, but now the ideas seem to flow smoother and I like my characters (because they are part of me). Does that make sense?

The other idea that I came up with to help with "Ideas" was to write out different settings, genres, age groups, types of protagonists/antagonists, etc all on separate pieces of coloured paper (settings on green paper, genres on yellow,) then pick one slip of paper from each group.

Or you can look at the magazines that have themed issues and see if any of them inspire you.

Sorry I'm not more helpful.  I'm sure there are others with idea generaters too.
Good Luck. 
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« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 09:04:45 PM »

Thank you all for the help. I was able to use your suggestions to create a story with an obvious conflict!
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« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2011, 08:01:14 PM »

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« Reply #6 on: May 02, 2011, 03:18:05 PM »

Honestly the word list didn't work for me either. I ended up writing a story from some word prompts I have. I am still waiting on the return form my instructor. The story was one I wrote a while back but I changed it to direct it towards teenagers. Wasn't my best effort cause I was suffering from the flu at the time. I kinda rushed it cause there were so many days I was in bed not moving.

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« Reply #7 on: May 02, 2011, 03:21:06 PM »

I am a big fan of the extension request. I think I used for more than half the lessons. I may need to use it twice for 10B.
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« Reply #8 on: May 02, 2011, 04:57:39 PM »

I am a big fan of the extension request. I think I used for more than half the lessons. I may need to use it twice for 10B.

Hey, I did that! Yes, extensions are nice if you need them. I have never been denied an extension.

You are almost done 10B, right?!
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« Reply #9 on: May 02, 2011, 05:00:21 PM »

I have taken a long extension for every assignment so far in the novel course. I am being a total slug.  Undecided
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« Reply #10 on: May 02, 2011, 05:20:31 PM »

Beth, I got 10a back and she loves my idea, had only one suggestion for me-my antagonists were too evil. Have I started it yet? Yes, two sentences. It was originally due April 22. I extended it to June 20th. I need a kick in the BLEEP!
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« Reply #11 on: May 05, 2011, 04:00:46 PM »

I'm not sure I understand what you're asking but anything you're wanting to do outside the confines of the assignment, should be cleared with your instructor.
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« Reply #12 on: May 05, 2011, 05:18:47 PM »

I looked at assignment two last night. Can I switch them and do #3 first? (fiction/non-fiction) I'm just now trying to do fiction.

I have one story, but it's based on a true event in my life, very loosely based. Is that ok? I'd like to try to do something TOTALLY fiction...I have an idea, but grrr can't seem to quite get it together.

It's a  "What if someone found a..." I know what they find, but working it out, not sure, yet.



Sarah,  as Jan said, you need to clear that request with your instructor, but I'd just like to point out that as you go on in the course, you will see that the assignments are laid out in a certain order for a very specific reason.

 It is so that you will grow in your writing step by step, and learn one specific lesson at a time.  That's really important for anyone who is just starting out.  I know you're having trouble with the fiction/plot end of it, and that once you think you've got something started, you want to continue...but...give this a lot of thought before you even contact your instructor.

 Learning step by step is basic to all of us in our writing, and in the long run, it is sure a lot better than trying to skip around and substitute one assignment for another...especially when each assignment not only teaches you something new, but it builds upon what you've already learned previously.  But if you haven't learned that previous lesson, then you're in for a lot of trouble.

Just a suggestion, but you might want to think about this.
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« Reply #13 on: May 05, 2011, 06:17:51 PM »

Speaking as an instructor, never just surprise your instructor by doing something different. I've had students contact me with very specific requests to do something outside the course in place of an assignment, usually for a very specific reason. Unless the assignment is going to benefit them more than the thing they want to do...I'll usually go with it. But the students who just surprise me make it very difficult for me to help them get what they need out of the course. They'll often miss important skill building moments. They often don't grow in the areas they need. And they are often resistant to the growth they need. So as soon as you surprise an instructor, the instructor is going to worry because it's a behavior that often goes hand-in-hand with a lot of self-sabatoging choices.

So it's always best fo send a note to the instructor and see what looks like it'll work before for you and what you're going to need to succeed in the course.
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« Reply #14 on: May 05, 2011, 07:45:58 PM »

oh, sorry, I was only kidding. I'm one who usually sticks to the rules. (I should have made it clear that I was kidding.)

 I feel really bad that you both took out so much time from your busy day to reply when I could have just added a smiley to tell you I didn't mean that. I'm very sorry and I'll be more careful about my "jokes" from now on!

as a post script, I deleted my joking question so as not to cause future confusion. I apologize. I wasn't thinking.
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