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 on: November 13, 2014, 07:17:28 AM 
Started by Okami - Last post by jfields
Both (query synopsis and stand-alone) will cover the same ground so don't worry over much about them overlapping. Basically for every book you should write a synopsis of one line, one paragraph, and one page. That way you're ready no matter what's asked of you in the synopsis department. For me, I would LEAD the one page synopsis with the one line synopsis -- then do the more leisurely explanation of the major plot events. A paragraph and a page synopsis should have an arc, so that it reveals the structure of the novel's plot (even thought it doesn't rehash every element.).

As for your second question, I'm not a good source -- the markets I sell to usually want samples right at the point of first contact. If I'm proposing something original, I usually HAVE to send the first chapter (and sometimes the first three). But others may chime in.

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 on: November 13, 2014, 07:00:45 AM 
Started by Okami - Last post by Okami
What's the difference between a stand alone synopsis versus a query synopsis?

Often agents or editors at publishers want both, how do you avoid re-hashing too much redundant stuff between them?

Also, and forgive me if this is a bit off-topic, but I've heard various schools of thought on how even though agents and editors INSIST on the first point of contact being just a query letter (or book proposal for nonfiction) and nothing from the ACTUAL book you're proposing. Roll Eyes

Yet many here on WR (and I've read in various Children's Book Insider newsletters) that even people who specify they ONLY want to see a query first often say a page or two from the ACTUAL BOOK is okay to send along with the query and/or stand alone synopsis, for those who've gotten BEYOND the query/proposal stage, what's been your experience?

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 on: November 13, 2014, 05:41:18 AM 
Started by jfields - Last post by jfields
Children's Writers eNews
November 13, 2014
"The Write Words to Read"
The Institute of Children's Literature
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Editor: Jan Fields -- author@janfields.com

-------------------------------------------------------------------"I'm afraid of all kinds of things. I'm afraid of failing at whatever story I'm writing – that it won't come up for me, or that I won't be able to finish it."
--Stephen King
from the Rolling Stone interview
http://www.rollingstone.com/culture/features/stephen-king-the-rolling-stone-interview-20141031#ixzz3IrHS2EQF

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CONTENTS OF THIS ISSUE
1. News
2. Online in Rx
3. At the Writer's Retreat
4. What's New at Kristi's?
5. Market
6. Cool Site
7. Essay
8. Good News
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1. The Deadline for the Kindergarten Story Contest has been extended!
https://www.writersbookstore.com/sc/wbs_contest.htm
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2. In the Rx
Book Proposals -- UPDATED
http://www.institutechildrenslit.com/rx/tr01/terrywhalin06.shtml
Terry Whalin kindly updated links and information in the chat from the archives, so anyone interested in book proposals should check it out. Lots of new resources.
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3. Are You On The Writer's Retreat?
http://www.institutechildrenslit.net/index.php
Come and check out the November discussion on writing proposals and synopsis.

And for all visitors whether registered or not, you'll find plenty of helpful information: get help for student lessons. Learn to build solid plots. Share your ups and downs with fellow writers. It's all there.
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4. What's New at Kristi's?
http://kristiholl.net/writers-blog/

Friday, Nov. 7: "Climbing Out of a Writing Hole"
When you're behind on a writing project and so deep in a hole that you can't see daylight, here's a strategy for climbing out!

Tuesday, Nov. 11: "Dismount to Find Writing Time"
If you have trouble finding time to write--if your schedule is truly too full--something must go. Here's one way to find that time you need.

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5. BIDE
http://bide.com.au/submit/
This is not a children's market, but since children's writers are often well practiced at writing very short pieces, this might be a good opportunity. Flash fiction and nonfiction. Poetry. Paid market. December 31 Deadline
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6. Is Expository Derogatory?
http://celebratescience.blogspot.com/
With nonfiction getting so much attention (and editor requests), it's good to understand the changes that nonfiction has gone through in the last years and how it's better and more exciting than ever.
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7. WRITING SHORT MYSTERIES

Most of us have fond memories of reading children’s mystery stories when we were kids. There are few folks my age who don’t instantly recognize the name Nancy Drew or The Hardy Boys. For a while, mysteries ruled in series books. Today, many books have a mystery element but are nearly always mixed in with action/adventure or other genre. In mystery novels, the mash-up is common.

Now, mysteries are still listed in the guidelines of magazines as well. The mystery story format is a natural for short fiction because a mystery is a type of puzzle. It can be very long and complex (the novel) or it can be much more direct and simple (the short story) but it’ll always be a puzzle. When you boil down the plot of a short story mystery, it will look like this: Main character discovers a puzzle and works to unravel the clues to discover what is really going on. So let’s break it down to look at what a mystery must have.

MAIN CHARACTER

A mystery short story works best when you have a single clear main character. This is because a mystery is all about the main character – what motivates him, how his mind works, his resourcefulness, his tenacity, and ultimately his success. A mystery with a generic “kid” main character is always going to feel weak. So build a main character who lingers in the memory.

The mystery main character should have some compelling characteristic that makes him perfect to be your story’s “detective” (now, you never need to call your main character a detective, but ultimately he will act like one because he is hunting clues and interpreting them – behaviors of a detective.). Usually a mystery main character will have some characteristic that cannot leave the mystery alone – boundless curiosity or a dogged tenacity. If your main character lacks those characteristics, then you’ll need to build in a motivation to keep the detective on the job – like having him solve a “crime” he’s being blamed for or giving him a “ticking clock” (a serious consequence if he doesn’t solve the mystery within a tight amount of time.) Pressure builds story tension so don’t be afraid to put your main character under pressure.

A mystery main character without motivation or pressure simply won’t care whether the problem is solved or not. And the result of not solving the problem will be weak…making the story weak. As in any short story, you must have a plot that feels important to the main character.

PUZZLE

The heart of a mystery is a puzzle – something that looks one way but really is actually not at all how it looks. The mystery puzzle should be something that must be solved. In one mystery short story I wrote, a boy is accused of stealing trading cards from a store because the cards go missing every time the boy goes to the store. Certainly the coincidence makes him look guilty. He can’t be guilty, because he’s our main character and we’re in his viewpoint. So we know he’s not guilty. But we also know that he’s going to have to find out what’s going on.

The puzzle should not be too easy to solve. In the mystery story about the boy, the solution was fairly simple. The very heavy shopkeeper was suspicious of small boys so she always followed them around through the narrow aisles of the store. As she followed him down the aisle with the trading cards, her girth (and her swishy skirt) were sweeping the cards off the shelf and into a side shelf bin. Since she only followed small boys through the store – it looked as if the small boys were thieves.

But although the answer might be simple, the finding of the answer cannot be. The main character doesn’t know why the cards have vanished. And he’s been banned from the store. He must find another way to discover how the cards are disappearing. And his thinking must be believable for a young boy.

One thing you must not do is have someone else jump in and solve the puzzle (you can’t have the boy tell his mom so she storms the store, hunts around and finds the missing cards, deducing herself how they vanished.) The main character must solve it. It shouldn’t just resolve itself (you can’t have the shopkeeper feel her dress knock something from the shelf, and then go looking to see if she had any other askew merchandise and discover the cards…then track the boy down and apologize.). There are always ways to resolve a mystery that spoil the ending for the reader – the satisfying ending makes the main character win against the puzzle.

WORK

The main character must do something. For instance, it is not a mystery if Bonny Bunny notices that all the spring violets are missing, but only gives it a passing thought as she hops down the bunny trail. Then she notices none of her friends are home, but only gives it a passing thought as she hops down the bunny trail. Then she notices that the forest market is out of carrots! But she only hops sadly down the bunny trail until she reaches the Morning Meadow where – surprise, all her friends have a birthday party for her with a big vase of violets as a centerpiece and carrot lemonade for a beverage! It would be a sweet little episodic tale, but not a mystery because dear Bonny didn’t do a speck of work to solve the puzzles presented – she just noticed them and moved on. You could describe it as “mysterious” in the cover letter, but I would avoid saying “mystery” when you have no one trying to solve the puzzles. Calling a story a “mystery” sets up expectations in the mind of the editor and if you’re actually going to give him/her a totally different kind of story, it’s better not to call it a mystery.

CLUES

Now, the main character needs to have a real chance of solving the mystery. This normally involved clues. Clues are anything that helps the main character figure out what is really going on. A clue might be something the main character sees or something he is told. A clue might also be the results of an experiment the main character attempts in order to solve the mystery. For instance, in the mystery about the trading cards, the main character thought (at first) that simply staying away from the store for a few days would resolve the problem. When the cards continued to disappear, the owner would have to admit the boy wasn’t the thief – but nothing disappeared when he didn’t go into the store. That was a clue. Another clue came about when he learned all of his friends were walking the extra three blocks to go to another store because the woman at the local store was too scary – scowling and snapping at them as they opened the store door made them turn around and go right back out! Ah, another clue.

Clues are a delicate balance. You don’t want the reader to know the answer too easily because you don’t want your reader to think the main character is stupid. If the main character fails to solve the puzzle with really obvious clues, he’s not going to look worthy of his happy ending. So the clues must require thought to make the logical jump to the solution. And the jump does need to be logical. At the end, you don’t want to leave any “but what about the…?” elements.

When the solution becomes clear because of the work and cleverness of the main character, the result is a satisfying and enjoyable ending. Ultimately, that’s what makes a perfect mystery.

FINAL TIPS

Some “mysteries” have been so overdone that editors just don’t want to see variations on them anymore. So, if you’ve done one of these – maybe you should think about going back to the drawing board:

The mysterious noise in the night that seems like a ghost/monster, but turns out to be the family cat (or squirrels in the attic or a raccoon in the trash.)

The mysterious missing friends that turn out to be at a surprise party for the main character. I’ve personally read this plot dozens of times in print in various children’s magazines, but not lately. Editors have finally grown weary of it.

The mystery that turns out not to be a mystery at all – the main character totally misinterpreted the “clues” and invented a mystery where none existed -- ending up looking like an idiot. This one is even worse if you need a wise adult to set him straight at the end – this kind of story isn’t satisfying at all to young readers. (Now, if someone was playing a prank on the main character and any sensible person would have interpreted the clues his way and if you can prevent him from “losing” at the end…there are variants on this that can work.)

So good luck with your mysteries – and keep us guessing!
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8. Good News

Suzanne Costigan: I’d like to announce that my contemporary, issues-based, YA novel, Empty Cup, is being released on November 23rd through Rebelight Publishing Inc <http://www.rebelight.com/> More than anything, Raven wishes for a knight to rescue her from a life of abuse. On her seventeenth birthday, her mom’s boyfriend assaults her. Mom blames Raven and kicks her out into a bitter winter night. As Raven struggles with the aftermath of betrayal, her knight appears in the form of a concerned teacher. But people are not always what they seem.

Marianne Mitchell: My middle grade book THE GHOST IN THE WOOD just won first place in the Arizona Authors Association Literary Contest for 2014. It's available in both print and ebook format from Amazon.com.  Woo-Hoo!

Robin Linzer: My YA novel, One Wish, is available on Amazon.com -- One Wish is about a normal boy who opens a puzzle box that hasn't been solved in over 600 years.  When he solves it, a genie pops out, granting him one wish.

Debra Kempf Shumaker: I'm pleased to say that my article, "An Owl In Your Pocket," is in the November/December issue of Fun For Kidz. This started out as Assignment 9 in my Writing for Children and Teenagers ICL class many years ago!

Kelly Carey: Highlights for Children just purchased my fiction story Growing a Holiday, a story of how two girls create the traditions and celebration needed to make Arbor Day a real holiday.

Claudia Cangilla McAdam: My THE CHRISTMAS TREE CRIED, which hit local bestseller status in the Denver area, is now available as an Amazon Kindle eBook at Amazon.com <http://Amazon.com> . It's a fictional story based on how the Christmas tree for the Blue Room in the White House is chosen.

Maria Bostian: My first picture book, WHAT SHOULD DAISY DO, should be out by the end of December.  It is published by Ambassador International and is a tale about what happens when Pete the Pig invites Daisy the Dalmatian to play with matches and lighters. 

What's Your Good News? Send to author@janfields.com -- be sure to put "good news" in the subject line since I get a lot of book announcements due to the review work I do. So I don't want your good news to slip through the cracks.
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 14 
 on: November 07, 2014, 02:16:46 PM 
Started by jojocookie - Last post by jojocookie
 Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin

 15 
 on: November 07, 2014, 11:08:18 AM 
Started by jojocookie - Last post by Basil
I don't have to make myself interesting.  I was born that way.  In addition, I was born incredibly modest but modesty prevents me from telling how much.

 16 
 on: November 07, 2014, 06:37:53 AM 
Started by jojocookie - Last post by jojocookie
Got it. Thank you.

 17 
 on: November 06, 2014, 09:32:38 PM 
Started by jojocookie - Last post by jfields
Right, don't sound one way in the letter and another in the bio.

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 on: November 06, 2014, 07:08:44 PM 
Started by Mikki S - Last post by jojocookie
Thank you for sharing that.

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 on: November 06, 2014, 10:14:30 AM 
Started by Mikki S - Last post by Mikki S
Hi, I've been missing-in-action for awhile, due to family issues, but I hope you don't mind if I add something to this conversation.

Here is my query letter to an editor who contacted me:

Dear Ms. Hamilton,

In response to our previous emails, I’m very happy to be sending you a query, synopsis, and the first three chapters of my paranormal/historical/mystery, Beneath the Possum Belly: Night Cries.

Sixteen-year old Gabriela Gaudet, daughter of the owners of a traveling carnival, is struggling to learn about her psychic powers. She hears the cries of three small girls begging her to find their killer. When the carnival breaks down in their town, she is determined to do just that, despite the fact the town has covered up any mention of the children’s deaths. She enlists the help of a young man, Remi, who seems to know a great deal about her even before they meet. When dangerous incidents begin happening at the carnival, Gabriela knows there are forces within the town working to keep her from further investigation, but this only makes her more determined. The vicious high school bully, Melvin McAllister, attacks her; the World History teacher, Mr. Rutherford, who is not who he seems to be, kidnaps her; but neither they, nor the gargoyles who come to life at night, nor the veiled threats of witches, cause her to quit. However, when Gabriela and Remi find the murder weapon, with the same dragon on it that is on a ring Gabriela’s father wears, her pursuit of the truth becomes unsure.

Beneath the Possum Belly: Night Cries is set in 1935 in the town of Dead Man’s Crossing, Iowa, and is a young adult novel of about 65,000 words.

I have published about 30 short stories and articles in national and online children’s magazines. My debut novel for middle grade, The Freedom Thief, was published in November, 2013; my second novel, for middle grade girls, Cheers, Chocolate, and Other Disasters in April, 2014; and my third novel, also for girls, Lily Leticia and the Book of Practical Magic, is scheduled to be published in the spring of 2015, all by MuseItUp Publishing.

Thank you very much for your time. I have attached a synopsis and the first three chapters of the manuscript, and the full manuscript is available if you are interested.

Sincerely,
Marienne K. Sadil, writing as Mikki Sadil
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Frankly, my 'bio' is pretty cut and dried...not an "interesting" quirk in it anywhere! I'm not sure if making yourself interesting is what editors are looking for. My experience has been that they usually just want to know what your qualifications are for publication, and if you have had any of your work previously published.

However, I don't write-for-hire, nor for educational publishers, and I stopped writing non-fiction so I could concentrate on my novels, so maybe it is different for those kinds of editors. I don't know about that kind of query, so I don't want to lead anyone down the wrong path.

I just thought I'd share the kind of query I normally write, but it might not be what you all are looking for.

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 on: November 06, 2014, 09:00:05 AM 
Started by jojocookie - Last post by jojocookie
What do you mean by stylistically a switch?

Meaning the voice of your query matching the voice of your MS? Then doing a complete U-turn in the voice of your bio?

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